Whispering Secrets (Photo credit: Iguanasan)
Here is another short poem, put up for Open Link Night at DVerse Poets. Hear your loved one whispering….
Tell Me…
Tell me what you want.
Let your voice caress me lovingly
Stroking my mind to stiffness
As you whisper your wishes deep into my soul.
Let my ears be your canvas,
Painting portraits of passion with your tongue
As your needs inspire you to create aural masterpieces.
Describe your desires in detail
So we can follow each instruction to the letter.
Communicate carnal concepts carefully
So we will have no problem constructing them in our reality -
Actually carrying them out
Really fulfilling every fantasy….
You are the teacher, I the eager student
Seeking knowledge needed to pass all exams;
Attaining my degree in pleasuring you.
So, once again, I repeat my only wish:
Tell me what you want….
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“Tell me what you want…”
Tell me.
Better yet don’t tell me…
Let me feel for myself
Hey Bajan
Posted by Raivenne | December 11, 2012, 8:09 PMHey Rai
Long time ….
Feeling… feeling is good …… *grin*
Posted by bajanpoet | December 11, 2012, 8:12 PMOh feeling is very good indeed
Posted by Raivenne | December 11, 2012, 8:17 PMFantastic…this love thing looks good on you Poet! And I’m only blushing a little bit today
Posted by tashtoo | December 11, 2012, 8:22 PMThanks Tash
Yeah I decided not to go hot and heavy again today 
Posted by bajanpoet | December 11, 2012, 8:25 PMIt reminds me of a poem I once wrote that began:
I rub the lamp
of male mystery
That rises the genie in you
Posted by Colleen@LooseLeafNotes | December 11, 2012, 8:23 PMWow… I’d like to read the rest of that poem …. I like that beginning…
Posted by bajanpoet | December 11, 2012, 8:24 PMGreat work Robert as usual ,
” You are the teacher, I the eager student
Seeking knowledge needed to pass all exams”
Posted by ainsley carter | December 11, 2012, 8:29 PMThanks Ainsley
Glad you like it 
Posted by bajanpoet | December 12, 2012, 2:03 AMSensual…
Posted by Laurie Kolp | December 11, 2012, 9:15 PMExactly what I was going for. Thanks Laurie
Posted by bajanpoet | December 12, 2012, 2:02 AM“Stroking my mind to stiffness” The mind is the ultimate sex organ.
Posted by darkangelwrites | December 11, 2012, 9:38 PMIndeed …
Posted by bajanpoet | December 12, 2012, 2:02 AMWOWWWW this is sooo hot
Posted by chanzibrenner | December 11, 2012, 10:34 PMLOL Thanks … Glad you liked it
Posted by bajanpoet | December 12, 2012, 2:02 AMha…..tell me what you want to i can follow the instructions to the letter….there is something alluring or enticing to that…but also in the not knowing and the discovery…smiles….nice heat sir…
Posted by brian miller | December 11, 2012, 10:55 PMBoth have merit, don’t they? *grin*
Posted by bajanpoet | December 12, 2012, 2:02 AMBeautifully sensual write!!
Posted by Mary | December 12, 2012, 12:07 AMThanks sooooo much, Mary <3
Posted by bajanpoet | December 12, 2012, 1:18 PMTell me what you want…I like the erotic line ~ Good one ~
Posted by Heaven (@asweetlust) | December 12, 2012, 1:58 AMThanks Grace
Posted by bajanpoet | December 12, 2012, 2:03 AMWell, haven’t we all gone a bit “Fifty Shades”? Of course, by being much briefer, your poem is much better!
Posted by Tony | December 12, 2012, 10:07 AMFifty Shades? really? *grin*
Thanks for the comparison, though *smile*
Posted by bajanpoet | December 12, 2012, 11:59 AMVery sensual, student – teacher relationships…yes, this works very well!
Posted by Gay Reiser Cannon | December 12, 2012, 3:54 PMThanks Gay!
Posted by bajanpoet | December 12, 2012, 5:51 PM