Here is another short poem, put up for Open Link Night at DVerse Poets. Hear your loved one whispering….
Tell Me…
Tell me what you want.
Let your voice caress me lovingly
Stroking my mind to stiffness
As you whisper your wishes deep into my soul.
Let my ears be your canvas,
Painting portraits of passion with your tongue
As your needs inspire you to create aural masterpieces.
Describe your desires in detail
So we can follow each instruction to the letter.
Communicate carnal concepts carefully
So we will have no problem constructing them in our reality –
Actually carrying them out
Really fulfilling every fantasy….
You are the teacher, I the eager student
Seeking knowledge needed to pass all exams;
Attaining my degree in pleasuring you.
So, once again, I repeat my only wish:
Tell me what you want….
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“Tell me what you want…”
Tell me.
Better yet don’t tell me…
Let me feel for myself
Hey Bajan
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Hey Rai 🙂 Long time ….
Feeling… feeling is good …… *grin*
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Oh feeling is very good indeed 😉
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Fantastic…this love thing looks good on you Poet! And I’m only blushing a little bit today 🙂
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Thanks Tash 🙂 Yeah I decided not to go hot and heavy again today 🙂
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It reminds me of a poem I once wrote that began:
I rub the lamp
of male mystery
That rises the genie in you
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Wow… I’d like to read the rest of that poem …. I like that beginning…
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Great work Robert as usual ,
” You are the teacher, I the eager student
Seeking knowledge needed to pass all exams”
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Thanks Ainsley 🙂 Glad you like it 😀
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Sensual…
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Exactly what I was going for. Thanks Laurie 😀
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“Stroking my mind to stiffness” The mind is the ultimate sex organ.
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Indeed …
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WOWWWW this is sooo hot
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LOL Thanks … Glad you liked it 🙂
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ha…..tell me what you want to i can follow the instructions to the letter….there is something alluring or enticing to that…but also in the not knowing and the discovery…smiles….nice heat sir…
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Both have merit, don’t they? *grin*
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Beautifully sensual write!!
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Thanks sooooo much, Mary ❤
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Tell me what you want…I like the erotic line ~ Good one ~
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Thanks Grace 🙂
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Well, haven’t we all gone a bit “Fifty Shades”? Of course, by being much briefer, your poem is much better!
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Fifty Shades? really? *grin*
Thanks for the comparison, though *smile*
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Very sensual, student – teacher relationships…yes, this works very well!
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Thanks Gay!
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