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Another OpenLink Night … and a New Poem: Rain


Last week was my first OpenLink night at dVerse Poetry Pub – and it was AWESOME.  The poems were fast and furious – and there were 141 different poems and blogs to read through…. I didn’t get a chance to go through all of them … but there were about 40 different people that clicked through and commented on my poem Phoenix.  

Now it’s here again.  Tuesday.  I’m trying to decide which piece to point to this time.  But I am looking forward to hooking up with some awesome poets all over the world again.

So, if you’re here for the first time, stumbling through the doors of my humble blog abode, do peruse the poems I have here – but also click over to dVerse Poetry Pub and check out great poets from around the world!

And now…. Rain

Rain

 nature’s wet showers

soak earth’s cover sheet

pleasure builds

floods released.

thunder

spasmic

rippling

convulsing

muscles contracting

winds intoxicated moan

pummelling passion

glass pane’s headboard banging

rain on galvanize pounding

nature’s climaxing.

 

Update: Also submitted for Poets United: Thursday Think Tank – Rain

About PassionPoet

Wordsmith. Spoken word artist. I inhale words and exhale poetry.....

Discussion

22 thoughts on “Another OpenLink Night … and a New Poem: Rain

  1. Great flow and word choice here – “nature’s wet showers soak earth’s cover sheet”, “glass pane’s headboard banging”. Wonderful imagery too. Thanks for sharing.

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    Posted by Uneven Stephen | August 23, 2011, 9:33 PM
  2. Such power behind the rain, love the word play, nicely done!

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    Posted by Pat Hatt | August 23, 2011, 10:05 PM
  3. Glass panes headboard banging…ha, nice line..i love the rain…and find it very passionate so you nail that for me…glad you had fun last week and hope this one is all the more…smiles.

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    Posted by brian | August 24, 2011, 3:45 AM
  4. Love the sensuous flow of innuendo.

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    Posted by colleen | August 24, 2011, 4:16 AM
  5. Orgasmic.

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    Posted by safehousepoetry | August 24, 2011, 5:44 PM
  6. Wonderful imagery. I love the sensuousness of rain. 🙂

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    Posted by bittersweetverse | August 31, 2011, 3:21 AM
  7. I loved your imagery; I went with climax of a different kind~ Well Done!
    Congrats on your performance 😀

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    Posted by Ella | September 23, 2011, 1:56 PM
  8. this got quite a double meaning. beautiful and sensual approach to the prompt. 🙂

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    Posted by fallenelegy | September 23, 2011, 5:46 PM
  9. I enjoyed the sensual rain of words… very nice write ~

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    Posted by Heaven | September 24, 2011, 1:34 AM
  10. wonderful flow. loved it…

    divisive

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    Posted by gautami tripathy | September 24, 2011, 3:33 PM
  11. I love the build up of energy till the end.

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    Posted by madhumakhi | September 25, 2011, 3:05 AM

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