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Sleep’s Puzzle


This poem is my remembering a nice cuddle I had once, and also reminiscent of a friend’s poem. Cher’s poem, “I LOVE YOUR WAY”, can be read here.  And now, for my own installment, I give you

Sleep’s Puzzle

Arms pull you close

Drawing living essence

From your presence

As chin finds comfortable seat

In the crease between

Your neck and shoulder,

Nose pressed to skin

Drinking you in

Back pressed to chest,

Best protection against cold air

Snuggling deep into lover’s embrace

Slowly stroking lock of hair

Rebelliously tickling naked cheek

Sneaking from behind the ear

Like little girl playing hide-and-seek

Joined at the hip, we slip

Into a comfortable place

Two pieces fit together

Love’s jigsaw puzzle

Now complete.

Also shared at dVerse Poets’ Pub for OpenLinkNight

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38 thoughts on “Sleep’s Puzzle

  1. nice…love it when you find the one that completes your puzzle…you captured the playful peace of it well…

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    Posted by brian | September 13, 2011, 7:19 PM
  2. “Loves jigsaw puzzle, now complete…..” Cool…. I like that alot.

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    Posted by johnallenrichter | September 13, 2011, 7:47 PM
  3. very peaceful nice write.

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    Posted by Seasideauthor Sharon Rose | September 13, 2011, 8:26 PM
  4. It IS nice when you can be intimate with another and it all fits, rather that gives you fits! Those are moments that deserve to linger in poetry, and you have captured one well. Thanks for this!

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    Posted by Charles Elliott | September 13, 2011, 10:26 PM
  5. Really nice, agree completely- Brian summed up my thoughts pretty well- but really like the puzzle metaphor- it works very well for you in this piece, thanks for a good read

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    Posted by Poetical Psyche | September 13, 2011, 11:49 PM
  6. it is so good that you found the last piece to your puzzle and on top of it wrote such a great poem thanks
    http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/13/a-new-life-begins/

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    Posted by Sarah Johnston | September 14, 2011, 12:41 AM
  7. Excellent flow!

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    Posted by Mama Zen | September 14, 2011, 12:55 AM
  8. Awesome that you found the piece to your puzzle 🙂

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    Posted by ayala | September 14, 2011, 1:52 AM
  9. Sweet, especially like, “Rebelliously tickling naked cheek”.

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    Posted by darkangelwrites | September 14, 2011, 2:45 AM
  10. I sleep like this every night with my husband of 15 years, enjoyed the familiarity greatly. Glad you know this happiness.

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    Posted by Anna Montgomery | September 14, 2011, 3:27 AM
  11. This is sweet and I love your sentence structure…

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    Posted by Sultry Soliloquy | September 14, 2011, 10:07 AM
  12. It is a sweet place, when it feels complete. Nicely done!

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    Posted by Joanne Elliott (@soulsprite) | September 14, 2011, 7:59 PM
  13. There’s nothing like that sense of belonging with someone dear 🙂

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    Posted by lori | September 14, 2011, 11:55 PM
  14. Such are the comforting nooks and crannies of the human form.

    Anna Lo[

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    Posted by Anna :0] | September 15, 2011, 3:28 AM
  15. I loved this piece my friend! We are like puzzle pieces searching for our match, I have always thought that. Was so glad to see you make this expression in such beautiful words. Truly enjoy you! ~ Rose

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    Posted by C Rose | September 15, 2011, 12:51 PM
  16. fits perfectly nice.

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    Posted by Kahit Minsan | September 15, 2011, 4:04 PM
  17. Love the imagery. Made me think of lying in bed on chilly nights with my ‘puzzle piece’ 😉

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    Posted by kate58 | September 15, 2011, 5:21 PM
  18. Ahhh, so sweet. You are a big love-bug, I can tell!! 🙂

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    Posted by Jannie Funster | September 16, 2011, 10:28 PM
  19. Definitely, I love when me and my intended do exactly what you say….snuggling deep in lover’s embrace…it feels good to be in someone’s arms who loves you and you he.

    You were right, it is somewhat similar to my “Two pieces of a puzzle”. Beautiful…I’ll think of it tonight 🙂

    http://ahhhpoetry.wordpress.com/2011/09/28/two-pieces-of-a-puzzle/

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    Posted by ahhhpoetry | October 6, 2011, 5:27 PM

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