This poem was inspired by a friend of mine. She encouraged me that writing is a great outlet for me – and after I felt like I was constricted and confined last week I didn’t – couldn’t – write… but this is my first poem since that short stint of mental blockage. Enjoy!
Cosmic Connection
Your aura draws my hand
Desire tempts
Taunts
Dares me to trace
your face
with trembling fingertips
Moth mesmerized by flame
gently brushing past
fire in confident eyes
That lights desire’s inferno.
Electric touch
Sparks fly
I see you writhe
as I
rest my palm
on small of back
and pull you near me
Resplendent gaze
amazes me
Fingers rise
Interlocked
Into locs
Then we kiss
Static shocks
Lips drawn together
with magnetic fervour
Opposite sides attracting
Empty space between
contracting
into nothingness
Our lips touch
Fuse
Infused with passion
Distraction dissipates
Fades
to
black….
Back
to
reality
One thousand suns resurrected
the moment we
disconnected
The Universe hums
Energy surrounds
Lovers merged with
Infinite.
(Written for Openlink Night at DVerse Poets Pub)
aaaahhh…there’s so much in a kiss….beautiful….
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So much …. feeling, emotion, longing, desire…. yeah …. *stares off longingly into space….* LOL
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lovely.
😉
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Thanks so much!!!!!! 😀
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Hello.
Now that’s what I call one helluva kiss!
Nicely done, my friend!
The Last Kiss
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Yeah it would have been, wouldn’t it? 😀
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1000 suns…ha that is some kiss…very nice….
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hehe …. now if I could only experience it for real…….. *wistful sigh* 😉
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perhaps one day you will smiles…
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Oh yes…you must write! The rhythm, flow, word play…a delightful romp! I do believe your friend is “write” and you indeed must write-on!
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ROFL Thanks Tashtoo 🙂 Write On!
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vivid imagery, I mean your words give very visual actions.
Thanks.
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Thanks so much … as I was taught – “Show, don’t tell,” right? *grin*
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Lovely words, and lots of feeling.
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Had a lot of feeling when I was imagining the kiss too 😉
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Wow… if this is coming back from a mental blockage, definitely, you must continue to write. Fabulous piece. Love the sensuous nature of your right.
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LOL Thanks
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electrifying actually 🙂
thanks for the visit!
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Great line! Like your choice of line breaks here.
“Lovers merged with
infinite.”
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Thanks Jacqueline! 🙂
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This is beautifully electrifying and vivid imagery! I look forward to reading more of your writing!
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Thank you so much! I appreciate your comments 🙂
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Wonderful writing!
Erick Flores
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Thanks Erick!
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