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Interrupted


This is a  fun poem I wrote once when I woke up from sleeping one night and then couldn’t settle down and get back to sleep.  It was a personal challenge to keep the alliteration going 🙂  Hope you like it 🙂

Interrupted

Tossing

Towering tides turning

This way

That way

Tumultous

Turbulent

Tumbling torture

Terrifying throes

Thunderous tsunami thoughts

Terminate sleep

Totally.

 

2011.09.18

About PassionPoet

Wordsmith. Spoken word artist. I inhale words and exhale poetry.....

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10 thoughts on “Interrupted

  1. Enjoyed this! Totally!

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    Posted by Gary | November 16, 2011, 9:06 PM
  2. Great alliteration!

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    Posted by Laurie Kolp | January 17, 2012, 2:39 PM
  3. I wouldn’s sleep either ~

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    Posted by Heaven | January 17, 2012, 5:41 PM
  4. Yes, this must be hard but you did it!

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    Posted by Margaret | January 17, 2012, 7:06 PM
  5. You really captured the feeling of motion (body and mind) with the rhythmic use of alliteration….well done!

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    Posted by laura hegfield | January 25, 2012, 11:45 AM

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