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Connoisseur


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On the heels of my silver awarded poem Luscious, I wanted to write another poem in the same vein and with the same style.  I can’t say any more without giving it away, so please enjoy…

Connoisseur

Fingers playing under pleated skirt

Caressing folds of dark, dusky desire

I sample scented rosebud, taking you in.

First taste, my knees buckle;

Fall at your feet

Eyes close instinctively

Low moan escapes my lips

As easily as Houdini slipping from

Lock and chain

I lick slowly, excitement builds….

Holding still

As emotion’s tsunami rushes around me

Transporting me to heaven

I nibble your bit playfully, your

Chocolate flesh moist

Shivering desire takes me

As I take you

Hoisting your ambrosia cup

To fevered lips

Feverish sips

Till you are all consumed

With lust

For just another taste

Just another nibble….

I dribble over you

Until you come

Until you went

Until each crumb

Is eaten, well spent….

The cupcake is

Consumed

And I am

Content…

PS – I’ve been having friendly debate with a fellow poet who loves the poem but doesn’t like the title. What do you think I should call it?  🙂  

UPDATE  – My blog friend Loly (from http://ahhhpoetry.wordpress.com/) suggested “CUNNOISSEUR” with the deliberate spelling rather than “Fellatio” … I like it!

UPDATE  # 2 – As I am all for not giving things away at the very start, I’m going to rename this piece with the original spelling of “Connoisseur” – it will allow the reader to guess what the poem is about (and still be wrong LOL!)  But this way, it won’t give anything away – not even the sexiness of the poem itself … Thanks for all the help, my friends 🙂 Enjoy the poem 😉

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38 thoughts on “Connoisseur

  1. I concur, Fellatio implies that a man is the object of desire, but what you write sounds like a woman is the object of desire, so the title needs to be more womanly. How about “CUNNOISSEUR” with the change in spelling for obvious reasons.

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    Posted by Loly | November 22, 2011, 4:17 PM
  2. BTW I loved it!!! It reminds me of my poem “I Crave thee”

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    Posted by Loly | November 22, 2011, 4:17 PM
  3. i like the title change an the heat in this…there is satisfaction found in satisfying an other…smiles….

    you linked up last weeks poem for dverse again for this weeks, did you mean to?

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    Posted by brian miller | November 22, 2011, 9:05 PM
  4. I like the poem. It is very sensual and not the least bit subtle. Therefore I would prefer a much more subtle title. Unfortunately I don’t have one for you.

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    Posted by Old Raven | November 22, 2011, 10:03 PM
    • Raven 🙂 Thanks for commenting 🙂 The fact is it WAS subtle – at least from the fact that it definitely WAS about a cupcake … LOL Thanks for visiting … I realized for some reason my spam monster ate your comment, but I rescued it 🙂

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      Posted by bajanpoet | November 25, 2011, 6:39 PM
  5. Oh my! That is one seriously hot cupcake.

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    Posted by darkangelwrites | November 23, 2011, 3:38 AM
  6. Well Erotic and well written… beautifully spaced with the final thought… liked the title as it is.

    Shashi
    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/11/whispers-sighs.html
    At Twitter @VerseEveryDay

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    Posted by Shashi (@VerseEveryDay) | November 23, 2011, 9:38 AM
  7. beautiful.

    🙂

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    Posted by The Orange Tree | November 23, 2011, 7:13 PM
  8. Ha! I love the twist at the end! I was thinking “my my, what a devilishly erotic poem”, but alas, I was fooled! I loved this – cudos to you sir! 🙂

    Here’s mine for the rally: Butterflies

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    Posted by Cherlyn | November 26, 2011, 4:17 PM
  9. hot and sensual write…i like it ~

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    Posted by Heaven | November 30, 2011, 1:14 AM
  10. First off, I love your style of writing!

    I love the easiness this piece reads with. There’s a difference between sexual and sensual. This is clean sensual and I love it!

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    Posted by Nekisha CD Lewis | December 2, 2011, 12:11 AM
  11. Wow! That’s quite a cupcake. I like the title as it is now.

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    Posted by Victoria C. Slotto | April 27, 2012, 5:08 PM
  12. “Cupcake” is obviously the best title selection. Or perhaps “Icing” or “Unwrapped.”

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    Posted by Shawna | April 28, 2012, 2:22 AM
  13. Great erotica

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    Posted by marousia | April 28, 2012, 2:50 AM
  14. a very erotic piece…i kind of agree on the title…its got a cold calculated feel to it…contrasting your poem

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    Posted by brian miller | October 7, 2012, 8:18 PM
  15. See I read this before ~ nice sensual piece ~

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    Posted by Heaven (@asweetlust) | October 8, 2012, 1:50 AM
  16. whew…can someone open a window please…? smiles…hot and delicious write

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    Posted by Claudia Schönfeld | October 8, 2012, 3:39 AM

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