I was having a wonderful conversation with a friend of mine last night on Facebook. She mentioned that sex is more than the physical act and that engaging people on the level of the mind and intellect is much more satisfying. This poem came out of that conversation. Enjoy!
Mental Missionary
(For Riney)
Literary lips
licking frontal lobes
Stretching sensuality with sound of voice
Touching without hands
The centre of your being
Making love to your mind
Thoughts twisting
Fisting
Clenching
Sparring words:
I give, you take
You parry, I fake …
Feel you rake
nails down cerebral spine.
Your thoughts supine
leak ambrosia’s oil;
stimulating speech
leaves eager emotions wet,
anticipating intellectual entry:
Mental missionary.
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nice 🙂
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Thanks Kellie! 🙂
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Hahaha what a fantastic analogy and ~ very seductive yet the message is loud and clear!
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Thanks PoetryMan 🙂 I’m so glad the message is clear 🙂 It just flowed after my conversation with my friend last night 🙂
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Truly a great mind play! Very mindful aren’t you? Had to I hope you don’t mind…haha Really enjoyed your verse, very sensual feel to it, longing to touch but only doing it through the mind.
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LOL No, Patt I don’t mind at all ROFL
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Nicely done. Clever! “licking frontal lobes” made me do a double-take and pay closer attention. Love it.
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I laughed out loud when you said it made you do a double take 😀 Thanks … I really love this poem 🙂
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The best sex play….
is the mind play ~
Enjoyed the sensually and mentally stimulating write ~
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Thanks Heaven 🙂 I’m about to let the lady who inspired it read it …. 🙂 Let’s see what she says 🙂
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I LOVE this! The power of the written word is one thing, to hear them spoken with passion, discussed, conversation over steaming cups of coffee…no better foreplay…engage my mind and I’ll follow you any where! lol
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“…engage my mind and I’ll follow you anywhere…”
Ok … *engaging mind… NOW* LOL
Thanks so much Tashtoo 🙂
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nice…you are so right…really to fully engage in sex it plays on far more than physical…it incorporates the mind…all the senses…very nice sensuality to this…
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Thanks so much Brian. I really love how this piece came out. 🙂
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Excellent! This reminds me of an old song, The Girl in the Very Tight Hat, by John Weldon. Hope the lady who inspired this appreciated what you do with your conversation.
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Sorry, I mean what you DID with the conversation. 🙂
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She did appreciate it, thanks 🙂
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Nice 🙂
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Thanks Ayala 🙂
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So true. I like this a lot–very graceful, but strong and vivid language with a lot of punch. They say the most erotic part of the body is the mind.
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It’s a good piece. I have a friend that tells me it seems like it’s missing something – like it should be longer with some more lines just before the last one. I dunno… I kinda like it how it is, though it could probably be expanded…
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I love this, it reminds me of my Cerebral Love post! I just love the way you think!!!!!
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We’re evidently two peas in a poetic pod, Loly 🙂
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ha – this is fabulous. love the mixture of mental and physical.
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Thanks Sheila 🙂
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Good stuff!
The theme reminds me of that poem you sent me looking for on Youtube when he said, “I wanna get to know you from your neck…UP!)
Sweet =)
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Yeah “A Penny For Your Thoughts” by Gemineye…. I didn’t even think about that 🙂 *Thank you!*
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Ah, the sweet joining of minds! Should co-celebrists exclaim in staccato shouts whenever they share an Idea? Are thoughts best explored mutually on a bed? Or in the dark? Or in the stacks at the library? What can co-cerebrists touch upon that is most likely to bring great mutual stimulation? In the house of ideas, what should be placed upon our lips?
I want more, I guess. Worth looking into?
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It is worth looking into 🙂 Will see if I can expand this 🙂
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Touching without hands
The centre of your being
Making love to your mind
Thoughts twisting
Fisting
Clenching
Sparring words:
I give, you take
You parry, I fake …
Feel you rake
oh, man, you nailed it, masterful job on your targeted subject.
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*blushes*
Thanks Morning 🙂
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cool idea, mental missionary. this brought to mind a kind of surreal sensuality that WSBurroughs was famous for. You’ve evoked a weird interstice perhaps between digital and real world.
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🙂 Thanks Charles 🙂 I will have to look up WSBurroughs 🙂
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This is awesome! Written perfectly and had me like “yeah!!!” by the time I finished reading 🙂
Good work!
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Big grin! Thanks Scott!
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An interweaving of creative juices, animal and literal…. And of how words skilfully crafted can get under the skin.
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Thanks so much Brian 😀 Yeah, I love seeing words get under someone’s skin and see their responses… 🙂
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I was very engaged reading the comments (!!). I realised I hadn’t seen enough on reading and so re read. You are very clever indeed. It must feel great just to let go of poems like that, that they come out like they do – so well, stunning.
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😀 Thanks so much! Now I’m gonna go re-read both the poem and the comments again!
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