Wrote this sort of as a journal entry. I was feeling lonely and just had to get my feelings out on paper. Nothing else, really. It’s a pretty nice poem, even though it was more a brain dump than an actual crafted piece. Here is a little of my Heartache…
Heartache
I miss…
I miss
This…
Warm body pressed against mine
Divine connection as our lips press together
Light
Just … oh God yes … just … Just right
I miss knowing looks without saying a word
You heard everything I felt
Heart melts as your hug brings me into sanctuary
And I kneel and praise
For the days gazing into heaven through your eyes
For the ways
Your beauty makes me smile
My eyes close
My heart hurts
I miss
Miss the bliss caused by your mis-
taken notion that you understood the
potency of the potion you wield…
I field off your questions –
You can’t guess the surprise
none the wiser
Open your eyes… here…
A rose for my rose dear….
My eyes well up, tears
spill down pain’s fountain
Looking around, I start counting
the ways I could express my fears…
I miss
you.
Written for dVerse OpenLightNight – Come see this awesome set of poets 3 EST … pull up a stool and drink a draught!
Passion's Pleasure 
Informal stream of consciousness style works well for this subject. Nice.
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Posted by hedgewitch | December 13, 2011, 9:13 PMI’m glad how it turned out, actually … reads very well 🙂
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Posted by bajanpoet | December 14, 2011, 11:22 AMit does turn out to be a pretty nice poem…sometimes i just have to do that…wwrite to get it out…felt
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Posted by brian miller | December 13, 2011, 11:24 PMGlad it resonates with you, Brian. 🙂
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Posted by bajanpoet | December 14, 2011, 11:23 AMYes–stream of consciousness works very well here–
Audrey
@AudreyHowitt
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Posted by Audrey Howitt | December 14, 2011, 12:02 AMThanks so much Audrey 🙂
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Posted by bajanpoet | December 14, 2011, 11:22 AMBrain dumps really make for some of the best posts and they do help sometimes, great bit of verse. Can tell someone truly was a miss.
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Posted by Pat Hatt | December 14, 2011, 12:38 AMYup, they do help, don’t they? I’m glad I got this out….
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Posted by bajanpoet | December 14, 2011, 11:26 AMYour love is worthy of a grand passion, expressed here in words a woman could only adore.
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Posted by Charles (@shralec) | December 14, 2011, 3:57 AMThanks Charles 🙂
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Posted by bajanpoet | December 14, 2011, 11:27 AMthis sounds perfect for what needed to be written. glad you were able to get it out there.
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Posted by Sheila Moore | December 14, 2011, 4:10 AMI’m glad too, Sheila. I needed to get it out.
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Posted by bajanpoet | December 14, 2011, 11:28 AMBrain dump.. but quite a heartfelt one.. Nice that atleast its out than being stuck within,Keep writing and it shall heal you
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Posted by Divya | December 14, 2011, 10:24 AMI receive that. I totally plan on continuing to write … it has healed so many things in my heart already 🙂
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Posted by bajanpoet | December 14, 2011, 11:28 AMAnother piece that hits the right spot. Good stuff! x
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Posted by Nekisha | December 14, 2011, 5:39 PMThanks Nikki, love …. 🙂
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Posted by bajanpoet | December 14, 2011, 7:39 PMI love this line, “You heard everything I felt…”
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Posted by booguloo | December 14, 2011, 8:46 PMThanks Booguloo 🙂
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Posted by bajanpoet | December 14, 2011, 10:27 PMVery nice! So, so poignantly sweet. Blessings, Terri
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Posted by terri0729 | December 14, 2011, 9:44 PMThank you so much Terri! 🙂
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Posted by bajanpoet | December 14, 2011, 10:27 PMtouching piece with an ache to it that is quite felt…enjoyed the vowel sound play in this trio of lines
“And I kneel and praise
For the days gazing into heaven through your eyes
For the ways”
really reads well aloud…lovely write my friend. Thank you for your always kind words, hope you are well! ~ Rose
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Posted by C Rose | December 15, 2011, 5:03 AMI missed this one somehow. You are right, it is similar to my 1000 candles poem. It is heart-wrenching and poignant. Excellent write!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/14/wow/
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Posted by charlesmashburn | December 15, 2011, 12:12 PMThanks so much Charles 😀
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Posted by bajanpoet | December 15, 2011, 12:56 PMI’m pleased you just let it all go to flow. Eventually, it is only time and distance from the pain that heals, as we in turn allow ourselves to heal. Lovely piece.
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Posted by Daydreamertoo | December 15, 2011, 6:13 PMThanks so much, Daydreamer … yes the pain is much less than it was when it was fresh….
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Posted by bajanpoet | December 15, 2011, 6:27 PM