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Heartache


Wrote this sort of as a journal entry. I was feeling lonely and just had to get my feelings out on paper.  Nothing else, really. It’s a pretty nice poem, even though it was more a brain dump than an actual crafted piece.  Here is a little of my Heartache…

Heartache

I miss…

I miss

This…

Warm body pressed against mine

Divine connection as our lips press together

Light

Just … oh God yes … just … Just right

I miss knowing looks without saying a word

You heard everything I felt

Heart melts as your hug brings me into sanctuary

And I kneel and praise

For the days gazing into heaven through your eyes

For the ways

Your beauty makes me smile

My eyes close

My heart hurts

I miss

Miss the bliss caused by your mis-

taken notion that you understood the

potency of the potion you wield…

I field off your questions –

You can’t guess the surprise

none the wiser

Open your eyes… here…

A rose for my rose dear….

My eyes well up, tears

spill down pain’s fountain

Looking around, I start counting

the ways I could express my fears…

I miss

you.

Written for dVerse OpenLightNight – Come see this awesome set of poets 3 EST … pull up a stool and drink a draught! 


About PassionPoet

Wordsmith. Spoken word artist. I inhale words and exhale poetry.....

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25 thoughts on “Heartache

  1. Informal stream of consciousness style works well for this subject. Nice.

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    Posted by hedgewitch | December 13, 2011, 9:13 PM
  2. it does turn out to be a pretty nice poem…sometimes i just have to do that…wwrite to get it out…felt

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    Posted by brian miller | December 13, 2011, 11:24 PM
  3. Yes–stream of consciousness works very well here–

    Audrey
    @AudreyHowitt

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    Posted by Audrey Howitt | December 14, 2011, 12:02 AM
  4. Brain dumps really make for some of the best posts and they do help sometimes, great bit of verse. Can tell someone truly was a miss.

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    Posted by Pat Hatt | December 14, 2011, 12:38 AM
  5. Your love is worthy of a grand passion, expressed here in words a woman could only adore.

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    Posted by Charles (@shralec) | December 14, 2011, 3:57 AM
  6. this sounds perfect for what needed to be written. glad you were able to get it out there.

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    Posted by Sheila Moore | December 14, 2011, 4:10 AM
  7. Brain dump.. but quite a heartfelt one.. Nice that atleast its out than being stuck within,Keep writing and it shall heal you

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    Posted by Divya | December 14, 2011, 10:24 AM
  8. Another piece that hits the right spot. Good stuff! x

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    Posted by Nekisha | December 14, 2011, 5:39 PM
  9. I love this line, “You heard everything I felt…”

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    Posted by booguloo | December 14, 2011, 8:46 PM
  10. Very nice! So, so poignantly sweet. Blessings, Terri

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    Posted by terri0729 | December 14, 2011, 9:44 PM
  11. touching piece with an ache to it that is quite felt…enjoyed the vowel sound play in this trio of lines

    “And I kneel and praise
    For the days gazing into heaven through your eyes
    For the ways”

    really reads well aloud…lovely write my friend. Thank you for your always kind words, hope you are well! ~ Rose

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    Posted by C Rose | December 15, 2011, 5:03 AM
  12. I missed this one somehow. You are right, it is similar to my 1000 candles poem. It is heart-wrenching and poignant. Excellent write!
    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/14/wow/

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    Posted by charlesmashburn | December 15, 2011, 12:12 PM
  13. I’m pleased you just let it all go to flow. Eventually, it is only time and distance from the pain that heals, as we in turn allow ourselves to heal. Lovely piece.

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    Posted by Daydreamertoo | December 15, 2011, 6:13 PM

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