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December


This is a play on words (actually, it’s a gogyohka)  based on writing prompts at the Gooseberry Garden. (Choose from Snow, December, Winter, Vacations and Wilderness – these are the themes for the Third Poetry Picnic… check out the website for the entire prompt, I’m too lazy to type it out LOL) Enjoy… 

December

Wind turned cold,

biting,savage intent.

Gluttonously consuming

every heat signature –

Close the window.

December 2011

Image by Monica Palermo via Flickr

Also posted as an entry in OpenLinkNight tonight at dVerse Poetry Pub. Check them at 3 PM EST (which is after 4 PM Barbadian time! I never thought to mention that ….)

About PassionPoet

Wordsmith. Spoken word artist. I inhale words and exhale poetry.....

Discussion

19 thoughts on “December

  1. Brrr…close that window please! Wonderful weave, Poet…and I’ve still got the goosebumps to prove it! Happy OpenLinkNight!!!!

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    Posted by tashtoo | December 20, 2011, 3:34 PM
  2. nice…i kinda like having the window open…the bite brings me to life…smiles. nice form…see you in a bit for OLN!

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    Posted by brian miller | December 20, 2011, 7:59 PM
  3. Ah yes, winter consumes everything in its way for sure! I am tired of it, and it really hasn’t yet officially started.

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    Posted by Mary | December 20, 2011, 9:41 PM
    • Well as I’m from Barbados, we don’t HAVE winter … what I’m considering chilly will probably be a nice cool night for you! But I’m glad that it speaks to you, whether you’re from a temperate country or not! Thanks for visiting!

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      Posted by bajanpoet | December 21, 2011, 11:29 AM
  4. nice seasonal read! brrrr! 🙂 Lucky you to live in Barbados! Considered coming there for my anniversary next month… 🙂 Any tips for tourists?

    http://magicinthebackyard.wordpress.com/2011/12/20/polaroids-of-delilah/

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    Posted by Kellie Elmore | December 20, 2011, 11:23 PM
  5. A lovely weave of words and image!

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    Posted by Laurie Kolp | December 21, 2011, 12:14 AM
  6. I would rather be on the beach…Nice to see you ~

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    Posted by Heaven | December 21, 2011, 12:29 AM
  7. the perennial window open or closed argument.

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    Posted by zongrik | December 21, 2011, 3:07 AM
  8. I am sitting here in front of a warm, cozy fire, but you made me feel just a tiny shiver…

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    Posted by kelly | December 21, 2011, 3:37 AM
  9. Agree with Brian…I like the bite of the cold and the whip of the wind. Nice!

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    Posted by 1emeraldcity | December 21, 2011, 8:48 AM
  10. great take on December,
    winter time, we do need open window for fresh air.
    cheers.

    Happy Poetry Picnic.

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    Posted by Morning | December 21, 2011, 10:57 AM
  11. incredible sentiments shared.

    Hello, How is your day?

    Hope all is well,
    Appreciated your invaluable support to us,
    Best regards.

    Join us any time and share a verse or two,
    Your talent pleases me and makes a huge difference too,

    Hope to see you in soon,
    Cheers,
    xoxox

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    Posted by Jingle Poetry at The Gooseberry Garden | January 26, 2012, 4:11 PM

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