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Alight (Haiku)


I’m back with another haiku … still trying out new forms and working them till I’m comfortable with them.  This one came from a friend’s conversation, where she likened love to a butterfly that alights on your shoulder – so delicate, but so close you can see it’s intricacies.  So, this is inspired by and dedicated to my beautiful friend Itrina…. 

Alight (Haiku)

Butterfly sets down

Flower in full bloom opens

Sipping nectar now.

English: Butterfly&Flower
Image via Wikipedia


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13 thoughts on “Alight (Haiku)

  1. Haiku’s are a really interesting form of poetry for me. I think it takes just as much creativity to say everything you want to say in such little space. Actually, that sort of reminds me of Twitter too. Maybe that’s a techie’s version of a Haiku.

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    Posted by Stephanie Bennis | January 6, 2012, 2:44 PM
    • Maybe it is! Twitter – the techie’s Haiku 😀 That sounds like a new poem hehe Will mull it over 🙂

      Thanks! And I’m glad you liked the poem 🙂 I think it takes even MORE creativity to say exactly what you want with this form – you are so restricted; it really makes you work at justifying every single word. 🙂 Thanks for stopping by!

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      Posted by bajanpoet | January 6, 2012, 3:19 PM
  2. I hope you are having a great New Year so far!!! I am really still trying to develop my poetic wings…but I definitelyt enjoy your writing. I wanted you to know that I have nominated you for a group of blog awards…you can find the details on my page…have fun with it.
    I pray the New year brings you much peace and abundant joy!!

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    Posted by my rays of light | January 7, 2012, 5:16 AM
  3. Lovely words and image~

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    Posted by lscotthoughts | January 7, 2012, 7:27 AM
  4. great short form piece here! and I loved the introduction – the musings there and description of love – nicely done!

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    Posted by Ostensible Truth (OT) | January 8, 2012, 11:20 PM

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