Have you ever taken a trip and enjoyed the journey as much as the actual destination? You notice all the sights and sounds; you are fully alive as your senses are awakened to everything, you are ALIVE in the moment? Well take this journey with me …..
The Journey
want to kiss my way from
toes to fingertips
making the trip
s l o w l y
taking in all the sights along the way
noticing the little scar on your knee
from the day you fell out of the breadfruit tree
and tracing the rough edges of the place
where mosquito bit – leaving a trace
of her love bite
and I do the same,
soothing with a kiss.
silky thigh makes me sigh with
softness of tender skin
wandering,
my tongue has thoughts of plundering…
I pull it back into line
and continue my journey.
tracing each curving hip
with heated breath from questing lip
I pass over the rolling hills of your behind
remembering the first time
I saw your birthmark.
I have no haste while
arms encircle willing waist
not wanting to miss anything,
I stop to take in the view
how breath taking!
You
are exquisite, so divine
I start again the meandering climb
carefully scaling sloping spine
with kisses.
Tongue plays connect the dots
drawing lines between each freckle
but not to draw a picture –
I’m seeking all your pleasure spots.
Gently parting flowing locks
I make my mark on nape of neck,
teeth carving, “I love you,” into tender bark.
Kissing slowly down shoulder blade
noting carefully the goosebumps made
as trailing fingers trace your back
lips close to journey’s end.
I suck each finger – turn over
now
for the trip back
d
o
w
n
.
.
.
to your downy
mound…
Submitted to The Gooseberry Garden
and Real Toads Open Link Monday
Early Submission for dVerse Open Link Night
Passion's Pleasure 
What a hot trip!
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Posted by Laurie Kolp | January 30, 2012, 1:12 PMThat’s for sure … but it had a great view …. 😉
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Posted by bajanpoet | January 30, 2012, 1:32 PMAmazing write! Love the passion…
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Posted by Mr. Watson | January 30, 2012, 1:19 PMThanks man! 🙂
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Posted by bajanpoet | January 30, 2012, 1:32 PMYou write your sensuous poetry with a light touch (pun intended) which takes away the “Eww-factor” many attempts at erotic writing have for me. This was beautifully described.
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Posted by Kerry O'Connor | January 30, 2012, 2:22 PMThis comment made my day….. Thank you Kerry!!!!!!
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Posted by bajanpoet | January 30, 2012, 2:40 PMpowerful….
very cool trip in your words.
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Posted by Summer Rain | January 30, 2012, 5:41 PMThanks so much! I really love this piece!
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Posted by bajanpoet | January 30, 2012, 6:00 PMOoooh, sook sooky now! I like your road trip!
Let me guess your road trip happened after (http://raivenne.wordpress.com/2011/04/12/imagine/)?
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Posted by Raivenne | January 30, 2012, 6:17 PMYup! Pretty much! LOL
Girl your words are so hot…. Going to cool down now….
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Posted by bajanpoet | January 30, 2012, 6:48 PMhmmm…this is lovely…esp. like the details like the little scar where she fell from the breadfruit tree.. makes it so personal…nice..
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Posted by claudia | January 30, 2012, 9:53 PMYeah …. those little details matter when you are paying attention! 🙂
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Posted by bajanpoet | January 31, 2012, 12:16 PMsmiles..
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Posted by claudia | January 31, 2012, 10:09 PMThis was a beautiful piece! It was sensuous and loving and full of joy. Blessings.
http://kickinitwiththekids.wordpress.com/2012/01/30/garden-of-laughs/
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Posted by elizena | January 30, 2012, 9:58 PMThanks so much Elizena! I truly enjoyed writing this!
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Posted by bajanpoet | January 31, 2012, 4:07 AMHot! Hot! Hot!
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Posted by David M. Green | January 30, 2012, 10:52 PMFor sure!!!!!!!
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Posted by bajanpoet | January 31, 2012, 4:07 AMdang man…this is hot…love the intimacy in it…the knowing of where the scar and the bug bite came from…that is the intimacy that paves the way for the sensuality for me…very cool write…hey see you at OpenLinkNight tomorrow!
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Posted by brian | January 31, 2012, 4:09 AMAgreed, Brian – the intimacy is in the details 🙂 Looking forward to OLN!
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Posted by bajanpoet | January 31, 2012, 12:17 PMJourney huh, 🙂 its beautiful, I love the way that you outline your poems, its always a pleasure reading your work 🙂 ❤
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Posted by TENESIA TERI~ANN | January 31, 2012, 2:02 PMAs it’s a pleasure reading yours, my dear 🙂
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Posted by bajanpoet | January 31, 2012, 4:51 PMWell this was fun and sensual and so visual! Loved it!
@AudreyHowitt
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Posted by AudreyHowitt (@AudreyHowitt) | January 31, 2012, 9:58 PMThanks Audrey! 🙂 Visual was what I was aiming for 🙂
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Posted by bajanpoet | January 31, 2012, 11:44 PMA sensual write…I love all the details 🙂
http://a-sweetlust.blogspot.com/2012/01/honour.html
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Posted by Heaven | January 31, 2012, 10:29 PMThanks Heaven …. details make it sexier 🙂
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Posted by bajanpoet | January 31, 2012, 11:46 PMSteamy! Some great imagery throughout. I like the details of the birthmark and freckles, kind of grounds the feelings of ecstasy a bit, so to speak.
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Posted by Uneven Stephen | January 31, 2012, 10:39 PMHey Steven! The details make the piece more intimate … especially their location 🙂
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Posted by bajanpoet | February 1, 2012, 1:18 PMThis is way hot!
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Posted by Mama Zen | January 31, 2012, 11:43 PMYeah MZ … I think so too 😉
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Posted by bajanpoet | January 31, 2012, 11:53 PMSo sexy because he knows her so well…
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Posted by Margaret | February 1, 2012, 2:05 AMI love the intimacy of this piece 🙂
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Posted by bajanpoet | February 2, 2012, 3:55 PMsteamy and romantic, sexy and classy. well done!
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Posted by kelly | February 1, 2012, 3:23 AM*Bowing*
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Posted by bajanpoet | February 2, 2012, 3:55 PMYou must be a wow with the ladies, if you treat them like this! 🙂
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Posted by Trellissimo | February 1, 2012, 6:59 PMAlas, yon ladies seem unaffected by my affections… would love to try to express my emotions, but they seem afraid of such love….
Seriously, this is how I’d like to treat someone 🙂 But somehow, it’s not happened yet!
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Posted by bajanpoet | February 4, 2012, 12:34 AMThis is delicious! 😀
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Posted by Elyas Mulu Kiros | February 1, 2012, 8:43 PMLOL Thanks Elyas!!!!!!!!
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Posted by bajanpoet | February 2, 2012, 3:18 AMNow, that is one awesome journey!! 🙂 🙂
good going here with your word winding way.
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Posted by Jannie Funster | February 2, 2012, 5:03 AMThanks so much Jannie 🙂
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Posted by bajanpoet | February 2, 2012, 3:56 PMSo tender. This was my favorite line, “teeth carving, “I love you,” into tender bark.”.
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Posted by darkangelwrites | February 2, 2012, 5:29 AMI’m glad, coz I wasn’t sure if it worked … but I liked it, so I left it 🙂
Glad to see that someone else likes it too 🙂
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Posted by bajanpoet | February 2, 2012, 3:56 PMThis is a gorgeous gorgeous gorgeous devotion. Loved the way you wrote ‘slowly’ spaced out – and the scar on the knee, rhyming with the tree. ‘Wandering, my tongue has thoughts of plundering’ – EXCELLENT. Drawing lines between each freckle. Oh man, this poem is so sensual. It’s beautiful, I absolutely love it.
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Posted by WordsFallFromMyEyes | February 5, 2012, 10:36 AMI’m so glad you did 🙂
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Posted by bajanpoet | February 6, 2012, 12:04 PMMy my…what a sensual journey
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Posted by Susie Clevenger | February 7, 2012, 12:25 AMThanks Susie!
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Posted by bajanpoet | February 7, 2012, 11:27 AM