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Anointing (Extended)

I have promised to extend Anointing – make it more than a wordshine poem. This morning I sat at my computer after a dry spell of two to three weeks and started to write. As I tweeted today “Dear Twitter – my muse was out on sick leave with lyrical laryngitis – she is slowly recovering… welcome her back!”  So I sat down and the rest of this poem came to me today.  For those who remember the original wordshine poem – here’s the longer version. If you want to see the original, click here. Enjoy this longer version as well!


Anoint my lips

with fiery kisses

Baptize me in your oil

flowing from the passion

of our joining

Give thanks and praises

as we lift our hands

swing our hips

gyrate while

laying prostrate

in reverence

Before the Goddess

who rewards our worship

with molten lava

seeping into hidden crevice…

Voices raised unbidden

we come together with nothing hidden

No secrets – naked inside and out

souls knitting, weaving intricate tapestry

two lives, one mind and body

connecting at the centre


I prepare for my baptismal dip


Immersed completely

within gripping folds


We rise and fall


until we call to the Godess

for release

We call, but she, in wisdom,

holds her peace

waits for tension and momentum to build

Ascending passion’s precipice with skill, we

reach the summit, admire the view….

then plummet towards climactic boom

feeling fear of impending doom

but also freedom so intense

we feel our souls expand


 Momentarily as immense

as the galaxy


And then our worlds collide


Goddess anoints us with eternal bliss

Fiery passion engulfs all reason

All senses overwhelmed

exhilaration crests,

Till our season of togetherness

slowly subsides

and we bask in the receding tide

of our anointing.

About PassionPoet

Wordsmith. Spoken word artist. I inhale words and exhale poetry.....


30 thoughts on “Anointing (Extended)

  1. Nice imagery…lovely anointing.


    Posted by Dorianna (paintswithwords) | March 16, 2012, 5:40 PM
  2. I enjoyed 😉


    Posted by Nekisha CD Lewis | March 16, 2012, 7:36 PM
  3. Have I told you ‘mi love ya long time’ lol I love this!!!!!


    Posted by TENESIA TERI~ANN | March 16, 2012, 8:07 PM
  4. That was quite a ride… I love this. The imagery, the emotions. I literally felt my heart expand at a few points. Nicely done.


    Posted by Mikael | March 17, 2012, 3:45 AM
  5. I love how you incorporated the goddess into the, errr…. experience 🙂 Most delicious.


    Posted by darkangelwrites | March 18, 2012, 6:46 AM
  6. Very vivid write and with really great flow–glad your muse is recovering!


    Posted by AudreyHowitt (@AudreyHowitt) | March 20, 2012, 7:39 PM
  7. I’m glad you are back after your dry spell. More of the same please!


    Posted by Aaron Kent | March 20, 2012, 9:24 PM
  8. So full of emotion, a wonderful trip in verse, nicely done


    Posted by Pat Hatt | March 20, 2012, 9:41 PM
  9. Happy to see you!!! Don’t let that fickle muse steal you away! Really enjoyed this version!


    Posted by tashtoo | March 20, 2012, 10:13 PM
    • Thanks Tash 🙂 ❤ It wasn't the muse that stole me away as much as it was recovering from heartbreak that made me not be able to write or even concentrate on reading a poem for 3 weeks .. but I'm able to move on now, and I'm back! 😀


      Posted by bajanpoet | March 21, 2012, 12:11 PM
  10. nice man…i like how you expanded this…def lots of good emotion engendered….smiles.


    Posted by brian miller | March 20, 2012, 10:45 PM
    • Thanks Brian – I posted this one specifically so you could see the expanded version, rather than the poem “AGAIN” that I posted last. It’s currently on my homepage. Check that out as well. 🙂 Glad you liked it!


      Posted by bajanpoet | March 21, 2012, 12:09 PM
  11. I really enjoyed this. It was almost dirty. ;}


    Posted by Buddah Moskowitz (@ihatepoetry) | March 21, 2012, 1:33 AM
  12. crafted a steamy piece in these words, enjoyed! ~ Rose


    Posted by C Rose | March 21, 2012, 2:18 AM
  13. The gift of all gifts… sweet, sweet anointing. How humble and blessed we are at such anointing. How wonderful the experience. How well written and what joy the author has bestowed on those who read it. Thank you for the extention of what started as a fine piece of work, now reached excellance.


    Posted by nixworld2012 | March 21, 2012, 6:47 AM
  14. unio mystica ~~ brilliant ; )


    Posted by eurydiceleading | April 11, 2012, 6:29 PM
  15. I think you choose to expand it is a brilliant and clever choice! Thank You! 🙂


    Posted by creativeboys | April 15, 2012, 5:09 AM

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