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I Spy

This is another wordshine poem (For those who are new to this blog, click here  and  here  to see where I explain this concept.)  It’s one of the longer ones; it was so simple, but very effective in garnering the smile I was seeking 🙂  Please enjoy this little wordplay, and may these words shine into your heart as well! 

I Spy

I spy with

my little eye

something that makes

head spin

heart race

lips part

breath start

to quicken

tongue gets to lickin’

‘cause throat’s dry ….


I spy with

my little eye

the goddess divine

that makes my heart sigh

my desire’s lit

spark caught

blaze flits

from synapse to synapse till

my whole brain is on fire!


I spy

with my little eye

the face

that launches

a thousand ships

the curves

deserving to be

gently traced

the breasts where I’d rest

weary head as we talk….


I spy my goddess

I spy my Queen

I spy my Empress

I spy….


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About PassionPoet

Wordsmith. Spoken word artist. I inhale words and exhale poetry.....


14 thoughts on “I Spy

  1. and I spy with my little eye a real sweet and romantic poem withn a joyful twist. Realy nicely done.


    Posted by nixworld2012 | April 3, 2012, 5:26 PM
  2. smiles…the short lines def pull you along in a quick pace…i remember playing i spy as well…still do with my kids at times….sweet close man


    Posted by brian miller | April 4, 2012, 2:53 AM
  3. A sweetness to this poem that I certainly respond to…:))


    Posted by 1emeraldcity | April 4, 2012, 2:19 PM
  4. Lovely! Such wonder, contemplating the one who has this effect. 🙂


    Posted by bittersweetverse | April 4, 2012, 5:19 PM
  5. This is nostalgic and I love it!


    Posted by Laurie Kolp | April 4, 2012, 7:27 PM
  6. You do indeed limn those beautiful qualities that draw us to the beloved that make hers yours. We can share in your passion and desire so that it reflects our own ways of coming to love our beloveds.


    Posted by Chazinator | April 5, 2012, 1:25 AM
  7. Playful Bajan! “the curves deserving to be gently traced” like that especially.


    Posted by darkangelwrites | April 5, 2012, 6:56 PM

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