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Urge


I’ve been sick recently, and therefore have not been in a position to write anything new this week. That being said, I stumbled onto this poem I wrote a while back … as my poetic friend Beth Winter of Eclipsing Winter says, “You gotta love the #adult hashtag!” Well, since I was drawn to her blog through that hashtag, but stayed through the exquisite quality of her work, this one’s #Adult too, Beth … or is it? *smiles* Β 

Urge

Seductive stares lock, earth stands still;

Nature holds breath as

Sizzling tongues spark molten heat

Desire shaped hickeys branded on

Heaving breast

Arms lock

Bodies rock

Searing insatiable fury of plunging kisses

Neck flung back, rapture rises

Skin bared in flurry of NOW

Stepping over the line

No turning back

Drink the ambrosia of the gods

Cupped to catch the downpour

The storm breaks

Electric emotions break past reason’s dam

Tension snaps

Release it all!

Fast and furious, thunderous squall

Plunging into depths of awakened passion

Clung skin to skin

Sweat to sweat

Engorged entrance ecstatic to be filled

Oil slick, pleasure spilled

Enormous tremors rock our worlds

Lovers curl

And Earth exhales.

About PassionPoet

Wordsmith. Spoken word artist. I inhale words and exhale poetry.....

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42 thoughts on “Urge

  1. I always look forward to reading your work, #adult or not.

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    Posted by Aaron Kent | April 10, 2012, 9:07 PM
  2. and i exhaled as well….haha…yep the #adult hashtag can be a good thing…sizzling write man…hope you feel better soon….

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    Posted by brian miller | April 10, 2012, 9:23 PM
  3. I’am inhaling and exhaling your words right now, keep going and never stop.

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    Posted by leahJlynn | April 10, 2012, 10:01 PM
  4. wow… I think I held my breath πŸ˜‰ sensual and evocative ❀

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    Posted by Apryl Gonzales Sweet (@SweetApryl) | April 10, 2012, 10:48 PM
  5. Yep…#adult. But tastefully so, IMHO.

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    Posted by Victoria C. Slotto | April 10, 2012, 10:55 PM
    • Thanks Victoria πŸ™‚ that’s what I’m aiming for. A friend of mine said she doesn’t like to read writing that is, as she put it, “sex by numbers” … which is all “put it there, stick it here, hump and heave” with no finesse… so I’m glad that you caught the sensuality without it being a “wham-bam-thank you ma’am” affair!

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      Posted by bajanpoet | April 10, 2012, 11:22 PM
  6. Never mind the hash tag, if this were a movie, it would be unrated! Whew!

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    Posted by Semaphore / Samuel Peralta | April 10, 2012, 11:40 PM
  7. Oh. My. Word.

    * wonders “When’s the next flight to Barbados?” *

    /curled toes

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    Posted by Raivenne | April 11, 2012, 12:05 AM
  8. it very much IS #adult…at least in my world!! LOL …and the world you described…loved the imagery…in fact, loved all of it πŸ™‚

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    Posted by j_poetry (@j_poetry) | April 11, 2012, 6:04 AM
  9. Sensual and a lovely write !

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    Posted by ayala | April 11, 2012, 1:51 PM
  10. This is excellent!

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    Posted by lmwills1 | April 11, 2012, 3:02 PM
  11. whew..earth exhales…what a close…think i need to open a window now…smiles…well done sir

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    Posted by claudia | April 11, 2012, 5:11 PM
  12. beautiful!

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    Posted by eurydiceleading | April 11, 2012, 6:09 PM
  13. Ooh, spicy! Love this line: Desire shaped hickeys. And the last: earth exhales. Very nice. πŸ™‚

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    Posted by bittersweetverse | April 11, 2012, 6:40 PM
  14. I like the sensual write…I inhaled and exhaled along too. ~

    I hope you feel better soon. Thanks for your lovely words in my blogoversary. I appreciate it ~

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    Posted by Heaven (@asweetlust) | April 12, 2012, 1:28 AM
  15. Now I need a nap.

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    Posted by darkangelwrites | April 12, 2012, 5:04 AM
  16. Mmm… yes, you gotta love the #adult hashtag. This is rich, progression builds to match the increasing pace of heartbeats. Delicious. πŸ˜‰

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    Posted by Beth Winter | April 13, 2012, 2:28 AM
  17. wonderful poem…I hope you start to feel much better soon.

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    Posted by Laura Hegfield | April 15, 2012, 9:12 PM
  18. Flurry of now? Likes!

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    Posted by Coffee With Leonard Cohen | April 15, 2012, 10:56 PM
  19. Such passion! Why am I thinking about a cigarette after all these years?

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    Posted by Patti | April 16, 2012, 8:45 PM
  20. I love the part you said. Skin to skin it make me think about how will it be with a passion to love and fell to be with a real man

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    Posted by trishA arana | April 18, 2012, 3:35 AM
  21. I remember those days…

    Anna :o]

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    Posted by Anna Gramme (@hypercryptical) | April 18, 2012, 12:33 PM

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