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Contradictions


Just had a quick flash of inspiration today – it’s a quick little verse, not really one that I put much thought into … was throwing some sweet talk, and this came out:

Contradictions

Thoughts of love
twist

like a child’s windmill
blowing furiously

in the gusts
of my
devotion

My love blows
kisses
that float

daintily

and rest
like butterflies

upon the welcome platform
of your
heart

About PassionPoet

Wordsmith. Spoken word artist. I inhale words and exhale poetry.....

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25 thoughts on “Contradictions

  1. Oh! I love it! So sweet and wistful. “the welcome platform / of your / heart” Lovely! 🙂

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    Posted by bittersweetverse | June 5, 2012, 6:56 PM
  2. i like the imagery of the love like a childs pinwheel in the wind of your devotion…it is plaful yet…some really great touches for a quick write man…

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    Posted by brian miller | June 5, 2012, 7:36 PM
  3. nice…love the welcome platform
    of your
    heart…and the windmill image…

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    Posted by claudia | June 5, 2012, 7:39 PM
  4. Nice. Makes me introspective. How big is the “welcome platform” of my heart?

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    Posted by Ken Higginson | June 5, 2012, 7:44 PM
  5. Lovely, lovely piece–and I love that it just flowed out of you like that!

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    Posted by Audrey Howitt | June 5, 2012, 9:37 PM
  6. So graceful – and simple

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    Posted by marousia | June 5, 2012, 11:06 PM
  7. Enjoy how it goes from “blowing furiously” to “float daintily”, lovely.

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    Posted by Raivenne | June 5, 2012, 11:17 PM
  8. This is excellent. I love it.

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    Posted by hobgoblin2011 | June 6, 2012, 6:27 AM
  9. Sweet and breezy…”platform of your heart” love that…a little gem :))

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    Posted by 1emeraldcity | June 6, 2012, 10:18 AM
  10. Sometimes off the cuff is better than over thought!

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    Posted by darkangelwrites | June 7, 2012, 3:58 AM
  11. Beautiful dreamy words – love them!

    Anna :o]

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    Posted by hypercryptical | June 7, 2012, 6:21 AM
  12. Gorgeous little poem – has an innocence that is so sweet – love the image of the child’s windmill blowing furiously 🙂

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    Posted by Gabrielle Bryden | June 17, 2012, 10:53 PM

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