Just had a quick flash of inspiration today – it’s a quick little verse, not really one that I put much thought into … was throwing some sweet talk, and this came out:
Contradictions
Thoughts of love
twist
like a child’s windmill
blowing furiously
in the gusts
of my
devotion
My love blows
kisses
that float
daintily
and rest
like butterflies
upon the welcome platform
of your
heart
Passion's Pleasure 
Oh! I love it! So sweet and wistful. “the welcome platform / of your / heart” Lovely! 🙂
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Posted by bittersweetverse | June 5, 2012, 6:56 PMThanks! LOL It just came out – just like that 😀
Wrote it for my new love – and also just for the fun of writing! That’s why it was basically just jotted down quickly and posted lol
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Posted by bajanpoet | June 5, 2012, 7:00 PMSometimes the best pieces write themselves and need no editing.
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Posted by bittersweetverse | June 11, 2012, 9:05 PMi like the imagery of the love like a childs pinwheel in the wind of your devotion…it is plaful yet…some really great touches for a quick write man…
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Posted by brian miller | June 5, 2012, 7:36 PM*smiles* Thanks for the compliment, Brian 🙂
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Posted by bajanpoet | June 5, 2012, 7:55 PMnice…love the welcome platform
of your
heart…and the windmill image…
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Posted by claudia | June 5, 2012, 7:39 PMThanks Claudia ❤
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Posted by bajanpoet | June 5, 2012, 7:55 PMNice. Makes me introspective. How big is the “welcome platform” of my heart?
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Posted by Ken Higginson | June 5, 2012, 7:44 PMYeah – hope it’s big enough for her love to rest there – butterflies aren’t that big man – she should be able to fit 🙂
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Posted by bajanpoet | June 5, 2012, 7:56 PMLovely, lovely piece–and I love that it just flowed out of you like that!
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Posted by Audrey Howitt | June 5, 2012, 9:37 PMA lot do 🙂 I just don’t post them all …. but I’m glad you liked it!
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Posted by bajanpoet | June 6, 2012, 3:05 AMSo graceful – and simple
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Posted by marousia | June 5, 2012, 11:06 PMSimply graceful 😀 thanks!
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Posted by bajanpoet | June 6, 2012, 3:05 AMEnjoy how it goes from “blowing furiously” to “float daintily”, lovely.
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Posted by Raivenne | June 5, 2012, 11:17 PMI liked that too Rai… I wrote the poem before naming it – and it was that contrast that made me choose the name “Contradictions”
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Posted by bajanpoet | June 6, 2012, 3:04 AMThis is excellent. I love it.
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Posted by hobgoblin2011 | June 6, 2012, 6:27 AMThanks man 😀 I’m so glad you like it!
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Posted by bajanpoet | June 7, 2012, 7:25 AMSweet and breezy…”platform of your heart” love that…a little gem :))
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Posted by 1emeraldcity | June 6, 2012, 10:18 AMThanks Jackie 🙂
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Posted by bajanpoet | June 6, 2012, 11:36 AMSometimes off the cuff is better than over thought!
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Posted by darkangelwrites | June 7, 2012, 3:58 AMYou got that right, DA… Thanks love!
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Posted by bajanpoet | June 7, 2012, 7:18 AMBeautiful dreamy words – love them!
Anna :o]
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Posted by hypercryptical | June 7, 2012, 6:21 AMThanks Anna! Come back soon!
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Posted by bajanpoet | June 7, 2012, 7:18 AMGorgeous little poem – has an innocence that is so sweet – love the image of the child’s windmill blowing furiously 🙂
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Posted by Gabrielle Bryden | June 17, 2012, 10:53 PMThanks so much Gabbi ❤ So glad u like it 🙂
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Posted by bajanpoet | June 18, 2012, 9:29 AM