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Ménage à Trois


This is a collaborative poem between myself, Ainsley “Mr. Erotica” Carter, and Carolyn “EmpressPoetry” Layne – two Barbadian poets who became friends on Facebook.  I was just minding my business yesterday when up suddenly a Facebook chat with the three of us popped up; Carolyn had this idea to collaborate on a poem and I was just like – “Let’s do this!” We got all …. oh let’s not torture you with more waiting!  Here’s the poem….

Ménage à Trois

My heart stirs as you open wide
Your mind excites me
Don’t hide your thoughts
Your words make me stiffen
In anticipation of entering your secret place
Don’t worry – I’ll set the pace
With rhymes and rhythms
To make you squeal
My lyrical love makes you wet
And sends us both to the edge of reason
This is the season to be alluring
My heart speaks, and during my oration
I pour a libation
Inviting you to consummate
our conversation…R.G

I suckle on your libations
For your metaphors and haikus speak volumes of unwritten prose to my hungry soul
Sensuality oozes from my pores while my hips dip low to accompany your load
Feed me till I want no more
My heart and heavens spread wide in anticipation
I anticipate total annihilation
Of this plethora of emotions you have stirred
I am besotted by your spoken word
This is indeed the season for our passion to be heard
And during your dictation, a chorus of elation
Escapes my lips……E.P

Words to soothe
given birth to poetic
lyricists
displaying affection
and eroticism
as I suck on your body
like a cannulae
filtering your blood
throughout your body
As it keeps us perked and erect
…….you collapse
experiencing a lyrical orgasm….A.C

Your cries move from sensual sighs
To guttural moans
As my pen is honed on the sharpness of your wit
I enter you
Mind hit with every lyric
My pen’s prowess used to impress
This lyrical Empress
My words fail to express
How much my mind is blown
By lyrical lips fastened to me
orally, you tickle my fancy
My ears get hot
Gimme all you got
Talk your talk
You’re hitting my spot..R.G

I move from the page to the stage
Eager to rock your mic
Salivate my thoughts like droplets of dynamite
Ready to explode while you implode
Inside of me
My cup overflowing
Ecstasy from knowing, I’m hitting your spot
Just one word from you and I go from simmering to hot
Instantly, come on King, enter me
Your wordplay, is like foreplay
I’m ready for the main course…….E.P

Would you eat or be eaten as your body calls
You think you can handle me?
Only one way to find out
Cheap thrills
As the lyrics spills
exploding in phenomenal cries of esctasy
She thought she could lay motionless
But under the flickering of my tongue
Her body became one
As I played musical notes with every thrust
Up and down… A.C

This feels so right it can’t be wrong
Temperatures rising higher with every round
I’m going down for seconds
This has to be the best, I reckon
At least for me
Stuck in between erotica & sensuality
Receiving this penetration lyrically
I’m begging you to plant that word in me
So I may give birth to POETRY…. E.P

Copywritten (c) 2012 by

Empress Poetry (http://www.facebook.com/EmpressPoetry)
Robert Gibson (http://www.facebook.com/robert.gibson.3979)
Ainsley Carter(http://www.facebook.com/mrxqwsit; his book page is here)

Both of these lovely people are published authors – check out Ainsley’s anthologies “Poetry a Way of Life” and “A Journey Into the Abyss of the Mind”  and Carolyn’s anthology “Impressions of a Poet”.  She her work is also published in “Wordplay: Our Words are our Canvas”.

About PassionPoet

Wordsmith. Spoken word artist. I inhale words and exhale poetry.....

Discussion

24 thoughts on “Ménage à Trois

  1. that’s soooooo hot!!! I blush more every time I read it! Great work guys

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    Posted by Carolyn EmpressPoetry Layne | September 28, 2012, 1:54 PM
  2. Empress Poetry’s verses …hmm hmm hm hm hmmmmmm!! Very nice collaboration there!

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    Posted by Nekisha CD Lewis | September 28, 2012, 2:35 PM
  3. Awesome collaboration. Almost tempted to share it at one of the open mics up here in Antigua. Of course credit would be given to you wonderful wordsmiths.

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    Posted by Kim or Lisa | September 28, 2012, 6:31 PM
  4. Whew! Smoking hot collaborations here! I’d love to see this done live – ow!

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    Posted by Raivenne | September 29, 2012, 2:18 PM
  5. This is some hot stuff!

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    Posted by Laurie Kolp | October 9, 2012, 2:50 AM
  6. dang this is hot…and how cool as well that you collaborate together to create it…how hard was that to pull off?

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    Posted by brian miller | October 9, 2012, 7:11 PM
    • Not hard at all – we fed off one another … it was almost like if we really WERE engaging in the real thing … we were literally in a 3 way Facebook chat, so I would write a verse, EmpressPoetry would respond, I would counter … she would respond, Ainsley would react… so it was very organic 😀

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      Posted by bajanpoet | October 9, 2012, 7:15 PM
  7. great job keeping the flow together… very sensual, visceral, and nice and spicy!

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    Posted by kelly | October 9, 2012, 7:22 PM
  8. cool collab ..oh brought forth some hot verse…oyoyoy…smiles

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    Posted by Claudia Schönfeld | October 10, 2012, 3:07 PM
  9. This was quite fun and very easy! Didn’t realize this piece caused a stir, my apologies for taking so long to respond to all these wonderfully encouraging comments. Thank you all sincerely.

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    Posted by Carolyn EmpressPoetry Layne | November 14, 2012, 5:16 PM
  10. Woaaaaaaaaaaa! this is ……”Im speachless” #awesomeness

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    Posted by Latoni | December 20, 2012, 6:15 PM

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