I have been playing around with concepts and words lately. I took a snippet of one of my daily love poems to my honey and expanded on it, playing with the concept of worship. Yes, I already have a poem named Worship, and you can see it here…. but enjoy my playing with myself and enjoy …
Worship II
I want to worship your body
With the fervour of a disciple,
Learning every curve perfectly.
Committing to memory
The sacred texts you moan
As I turn each page
With stroking fingers.
I can’t wait to feel desire
Convulse your body
Catching the spirited shake
Of sensual earthquake tremors
Epicenter buried deep between spread legs.
I want to experience divinity
As my lips move slowly down your skin
Drinking you in
Coming into union with your inner core
Knees hitting floor in reverence
I sense the need to offer penance
For past misdeeds –
I’m about to enter purgatory.
As molten heat surrounds me
I need to grab my rosary
And pray for sweet deliverance.
I want to pass through passion’s fire
Into the paradise inspired by explosive desires.
Entering the highest level of ecstasy
Moving rhythmically as the spirit leads
Ba- *whew*
Baby, stay
Stay right … Right there….
I shouldn’t swear when trying to pray
But Goddamn when you move your hips that way
My body rejoices, singing hymns
Rivaling the angelic choir
Going higher and higher
A crescendo of nervous energy
Building steadily inside me…
Inside you
Inside….
Till we see stars up close, ’cause we’re in heaven
And we’re on a first name basis with the sun
‘Cause our worship has only just begun.
Bravo! Seductively haunting.
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BIG SMILES … thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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very good piece sir.
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Thanks, man!
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no prob man. you can check out a few of mine under the title poet’s corner when you get a chance
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whew man this is hot…love the spiritual elements you add as that is was sexuality is to me as well…fav part…
Committing to memory
The sacred texts you moan
As I turn each page
With stroking fingers…snap….worship it is…
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Phew…it’s official now I think…you poet’s have slayed the prude..this is hot stuff, brother…and I just said that without even blushing! 😉
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ROFL Great Tash 🙂 Good for u! Glad u like it so much! I worked hard at it 🙂
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This is so HOT.
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I am so glad you think so 🙂 I totally agree 😀
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Super sensual poem. Almost like a song. k.
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That’s exactly what I was going for … anyone wanna try putting music to it? Thanks k 🙂
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Amazing! I love this piece. Reverence, devotion, awe–all there. Just stunning!
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THanks soooooo much honey ❤
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So honest and loving and sensuous!
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Thanks Mary *hugs*
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oooooooooooooooo! love it! whew!!
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LOL Thanks Jackie 🙂
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one word “wow” !!!!!!!!!!!! Omg lolololol i just cant stop laughing, you’re very creative..:) I like! 😀
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Thanks babe … lol I’m glad you like it … it took a lot of work to tread the thin line between being creative and being offensive, you know what I mean?
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Reblogged this on Norman LaVelle.
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