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Sweet Nothings


Found a fragment of a poem that I loved but had not publicized before today … enjoy this little romantic piece of poetry – find someone and whisper some…

Sweet Nothings

I can hear your voice in every line

every word dances in my mind

pirouetting phrases twhirl synapses

Mind dances to pen’s beat

rhythmic and sweet…

internal rhymes a mental treat

sugar coated stanzas

cotton candy concepts

Everything you write

might

just

give me diabetes!

I’m not usually into sweeties…

but the sugar from your pen sends me

high

-peractive

mind starts to fly

and I

am blown away –

kite cord popped

free to fly unencumbered

non stop

imagination fills kite

blows mind out of sight

and when I rest

I’ll be in another place

but that will be the best

ride I’d have ever

had.

Cotton Candy

Cotton Candy (Photo credit: Wikipedia)

About PassionPoet

Wordsmith. Spoken word artist. I inhale words and exhale poetry.....

Discussion

8 thoughts on “Sweet Nothings

  1. Your words catch me every time. Sweetest piece of “nothing” I’ve ever heard 😉

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    Posted by Nekisha | February 6, 2013, 4:16 PM
  2. This *is* sweet! Very nice. Love the weightless wandering of being a kite and reference to cotton candy–both sweet and wispy. As always, fun to read aloud. 🙂

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    Posted by bittersweetverse | February 6, 2013, 7:12 PM
  3. ha i like the kite allusions…being blown away…made me smile man…nice verse….

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    Posted by brian miller | February 6, 2013, 8:24 PM
  4. Why Bajan, you’ve been re-reading some of my naughty poems again haven’t you? 😉

    Just kidding Bajan, I enjoyed this.

    Like

    Posted by Raivenne | February 10, 2013, 6:10 AM

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