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Speechless


I was inspired by the smile of one of my friends as she changed her profile pic on FB last week … I built a poem off the feelings driven by her pic.  Enjoy, and be made…

Speechless….

You left me speechless:
tongue tied.
Voice fading into nothingness –
the abyss
left as I fell into your eyes,
mesmerized by the wonder of your smile.
My heart skips several beats
as my brain entreats my lungs to work again;
Starved for oxygen as
your beauty takes my breath away…
I have to pick my jaw up from the floor.
Twinkling eye gives allure to your face,
hints at the poise and grace you have
as you move through my mind.
Can’t help it – can’t find anyone else that
gives me chills;
wills my breath to still until you speak,
hanging onto every word.
It seems absurd that a portrait makes me rhyme,
but it wouldn’t be the first time
that a picture inspires a thousand words –
which is ironic because, although I type
Releasing the feelings your features inspire
My tongue is on strike, conspires with my mind
To keep me silent; the words that I want to say
Stay trapped behind the wonder of your gaze…
And I am rendered speechless.

About PassionPoet

Wordsmith. Spoken word artist. I inhale words and exhale poetry.....

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13 thoughts on “Speechless

  1. What a fantastic write! You’d have me changing my pic daily 🙂 Love that you were able to find the words…and love that they rhymed 🙂

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    Posted by tashtoo | March 12, 2013, 4:28 PM
  2. smiles..i hope you shared it with her…and isn’t it awesome when the emotions just overflow and make us grab the pen… smiles

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    Posted by claudia | March 12, 2013, 4:32 PM
  3. the tongue conspires with our mind to keep you silent…ha…struck by her…dang…must be some woman you know…smiles.

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    Posted by brian miller | March 12, 2013, 4:55 PM
  4. Very charming! k.

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    Posted by ManicDdaily | March 12, 2013, 11:37 PM
  5. Wow, is all I can say! This is absolutely beautiful and there are so many lines I loved…”as I fell into your eyes” and “can’t find anyone else that gives me chills; wills my breath to still until you speak.” What an amazing poem just from one picture… 🙂

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    Posted by lscotthoughts | March 13, 2013, 6:07 PM
  6. i really like your style of writing, its very abstract and… has this little dip of cum.. lolol i love it. sweet, fresh, very erotic and always makes you think of jumping into bed.

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    Posted by mndchrls2012 | April 8, 2013, 12:04 AM
    • Abstract … with a little bit of cum… .LOL Oh I love it …

      I simply MUST use that as an endorsement when I plug ppl to read my blog lol

      I have a couple that are a LOT of cum but I usu keep those private (sorta – one is on my FB page in my notes, hint hint!)

      Thanks so much for your enthusiastic support! Keep reading and I LOVE comments 🙂

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      Posted by PassionPoet | April 8, 2013, 9:34 AM

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