Some of the weirdest things inspire me. It can be a photo, it can be a feeling. It can even just be a word….
One of my fans endorsed my work recently on her blog. In part, she said,
“He is truly an amazing writer and you will be easily caught into his web of desire. He specializes in tastefully done erotic poems that leaves a wonderfully sweet taste on your mind.”
The word TASTE jumped out at me … so I wrote this.
Taste….
Let tongue travel
Unraveling me like a tassel
Being teased by someone
special
I’m undone
As lips move seductively
Taking me in
s-l-o-w-l-y
Squeezing sponge
Transformed into
Stiffened steel
Feeling electricity
Conducting along entire length
The strength of this static shock is building
As you continue stroking
I bite my lip
Mentally resisting the urge to release
Not … yet …
Teeth grazing gently
Against heated skin
Straining against the gentle nudging
Tongue ravishing
Pulse quickening
Hips flexing
Pleasure ejecting
Injecting you with my flavour
I hear you moan as you savour
Licking your lips
Enjoying the taste
Of my treasure
Not letting a single drop
Waste.
(This poem submitted for Open Link Night 88 at Dverse Poetry Pub. Come along and be inspired by diverse poetry styles!)
Passion's Pleasure 
that is a good bit of being undone you know…ha…really cool quick rhymes in this…with some cool break beats like the undone line…its like you are suppression the pace at points to build the pressure for that ultimate release….
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Posted by brian miller | March 19, 2013, 3:47 PMYup! Exactly! 🙂
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Posted by PassionPoet | March 19, 2013, 3:48 PMNice…..Robbie G
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Posted by Cher | March 19, 2013, 4:04 PMThanks so much Cherie ❤
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Posted by PassionPoet | March 19, 2013, 4:17 PMIf I only had a word to describe this it would be “Tantalizing”……
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Posted by deathbyexpectations | March 19, 2013, 6:18 PMThanks so much!
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Posted by PassionPoet | March 19, 2013, 9:00 PM*cough* Very nicely done 🙂
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Posted by Nekisha CD Lewis | March 19, 2013, 6:58 PMLOL Thanks so much Nikki ❤
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Posted by PassionPoet | March 19, 2013, 9:01 PMA lovely erotic piece ~ I like the pacing and heat in the words ~
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Posted by Grace | March 19, 2013, 8:32 PMThanks so much Grace 🙂
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Posted by PassionPoet | March 19, 2013, 9:23 PMOh yes!
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Posted by Rowan Taw | March 20, 2013, 1:42 AMGlad you like! 🙂
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Posted by PassionPoet | March 20, 2013, 8:33 AMOooooooooooooooooooooo!
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Posted by 1emeraldcity | March 20, 2013, 8:03 AMLOL 😉
Thanks Jackie 🙂
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Posted by PassionPoet | March 20, 2013, 8:33 AMYum-yum – I remember (these) good old days…
Anna :o]
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Posted by hypercryptical | March 20, 2013, 9:17 AMLOL Thanks Anna 🙂
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Posted by PassionPoet | March 20, 2013, 9:50 AMahem ahem . This was .. mmm.. Awe-So-Yumm 😉
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Posted by ladynimue | March 20, 2013, 10:13 AMLOL 🙂 ladynimue thanks 🙂
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Posted by PassionPoet | March 20, 2013, 1:24 PMBeautifully told poetically…
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Posted by emmettwheatfall | March 20, 2013, 10:38 AMThanks so much 🙂
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Posted by PassionPoet | March 20, 2013, 1:26 PMAhem … are you allowed to have that much fun in poetry?
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Posted by Tony Maude | March 20, 2013, 2:52 PMI always do … they don’t call me Passion for nothing 😉 LOL
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Posted by PassionPoet | March 20, 2013, 3:27 PMThis piece is sooo… sigh! Sir, all I’ll say is that I really like it. Thank you for giving me a Taste 🙂
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Posted by Des | March 26, 2013, 9:07 PMI’m glad you like it, Des 🙂 Read more and taste more of me 😉
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Posted by PassionPoet | March 26, 2013, 10:21 PMthat’s a definite 🙂
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Posted by Des | March 27, 2013, 1:32 PMi love the flow…..it draws you in like quicksand……
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Posted by Darkcinnamon | April 9, 2013, 7:28 AMI hope that’s a good thing 😉
Thanks so much 🙂 I love your comments 🙂
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Posted by PassionPoet | April 9, 2013, 8:23 AMVery nice, love the suspense in every line. Keep on writing. We shall compare notes sometime! 🙂
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Posted by DemandsOfLife | April 9, 2013, 11:11 AMCan’t wait 🙂
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Posted by PassionPoet | April 9, 2013, 1:26 PM