I’ve just been playing with concepts – this may or may not be a pure haiku – but I just realized I haven’t done a short piece of poetry on this blog for some time now, and I haven’t gotten up the courage (been lazy!) to try my hand at some of the other styles yet. Anyhow – I present the concept of togetherness … done PassionStyle!
Together
Kissing you softly
Tonguing your breasts makes you squirm
Sudden morning rain.
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Passion's Pleasure 
hahaha…nice…great last line…i like your play in it…oh that rain…smiles. cool.
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Posted by brian miller | May 7, 2013, 4:47 PMLOL It hit me as a flash of inspiration when I saw the original haiku idea in my Fragments folder. Thanks! Great to know it worked!
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Posted by PassionPoet | May 7, 2013, 7:29 PMA poem of feeling for sure!
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Posted by Mary | May 7, 2013, 6:19 PMThanks sooooo much! I wasn’t sure if I got it – but I think I did 😀
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Posted by PassionPoet | May 7, 2013, 7:20 PMHow sensual ~ Love it ~
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Posted by Heaven (@asweetlust) | May 7, 2013, 6:52 PMyay! I achieved my objective! Thanks Grace!
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Posted by PassionPoet | May 7, 2013, 7:18 PMHmm…I think I know what that rain might be! Very sensual.
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Posted by Tamara Woods | May 7, 2013, 10:32 PMI think you are right 😉
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Posted by PassionPoet | May 8, 2013, 7:50 AMO, lovely sensuality here…more more!!
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Posted by 1emeraldcity | May 8, 2013, 6:04 AM*bowing* Thank you Jackie ❤
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Posted by PassionPoet | May 8, 2013, 7:53 AMMake it rain! Make it rain!
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Posted by Raivenne | May 8, 2013, 9:55 AM😉
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Posted by PassionPoet | May 8, 2013, 10:12 AMIt’s amazing what you can do with just a few words. Squirm was inspired, for sure. Thanks for sharing!
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Posted by Julie Laing | May 9, 2013, 12:42 PMhahah 🙂 Thanks Julie! Got the intended result 😉
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Posted by PassionPoet | May 9, 2013, 3:39 PMYou took me to a morning in my memory. I think I’ll pray for rain now.
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Posted by Beth Winter | May 9, 2013, 8:24 PM*grin* you do that 🙂
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Posted by PassionPoet | May 9, 2013, 9:17 PM