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First


Can anyone remember the euphoria of new love? Of doing things for the first time – or rediscovering  new things with your significant other?  This is a simple love poem celebrating firsts – maybe not as metaphorically rich as my usual work, but nevertheless the way I feel …. This piece will be shared with d’Verse Poets Pub for Open Link Night – starting Tuesday 3 PM EST.  Enjoy the poem 🙂

FIRST

First
Kiss

Heartbeat
Skipped at
First
Touch

Goosebumps

First time
Linked

Sync’d

Body
Mind
Soul

Made whole
Complete

First
Time feeling
You shudder

Uttering
My name
A prayer

To stay
Right
There

Yes baby
Oh God!

First tear
Fearing
Time apart

Starting
Anew

Fresh

First….
But nowhere near
The last….

About PassionPoet

Wordsmith. Spoken word artist. I inhale words and exhale poetry.....

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17 thoughts on “First

  1. Sweet, staccato memories.

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    Posted by deathbyexpectations | June 25, 2013, 3:18 PM
  2. love is def full of firsts…and in love each is significant…my wife still asks me the name of the song on our first dance….so its good to remember when they happen as well…ha…all things new…

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    Posted by brian miller | June 25, 2013, 3:20 PM
  3. I like the brevity of this – as fleeting as the firsts themselves. Very good read.

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    Posted by Buddah Moskowitz (@ihatepoetry) | June 25, 2013, 3:54 PM
  4. I too love the brevity here–it works so well in the tumult of emotional context–

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    Posted by Audrey Howitt | June 25, 2013, 5:11 PM
  5. Oh…MY…GOSH, Rob! Like a virgin….sweet…fresh…memorable!

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    Posted by KAtrina 'Itrina' Ifill | June 25, 2013, 6:42 PM
  6. The short lines work well to convey that breathless excitement of fresh love. A lot of sussurating, scintillating ‘s’ words there too, to titillate the senses…

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    Posted by MarinaSofia | June 26, 2013, 6:23 AM
  7. Love is full of so, so many first, but few as precious.

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    Posted by Raivenne | June 26, 2013, 8:19 AM
  8. Like a dewy rose at dawn …fresh and new…and o, yes, I feel it!

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    Posted by 1emeraldcity | June 26, 2013, 12:39 PM
  9. Love the flow, the brevity…There is a breathy feeling to it…Passion often has one catching their breath. Beautiful

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    Posted by Susie Clevenger (@wingsobutterfly) | July 1, 2013, 5:14 PM

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