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Lovebirds


I haven’t posted in here for a little while, but I decided to break my silence today. Β I’m in love, and I’m Passion, after all, so I decided to release one of my personal poems to my Beloved on my blog. For all of you reading this, go kiss your significant other… or go find one. πŸ˜‰Β 

PS – Kudos to my poetic brother Corey Springer on his new book “LIKE A SUNSET OVER DE GULLY” and if you are in Barbados check out his bookΒ launchΒ this coming Sunday, September 22nd. Here’s the FB Event page. Β I reference him also because his writing style influenced this piece. Β πŸ™‚ Enjoy

LOVEBIRDS

Love birds
Sing sweetly
The harmony
Of unity
Thrilling the
Auditory
Canals of the
Awaiting
Audience.

Wrapped in
Rapt attention
Not wanting to
Miss a note
As these love
Birds’ lives
Are heard

Love binds
Us two
To-
Gether

To get her
To be connected
To another
Took courage
As her heart
Took off
And flew
Across the sea
Landed here
In Bim *
With me

Lovebirds’
Birth
Berthed
Within twin hearts
Started with
Quick spark

Sudden

Lit a flame
Inflamed passions
Fashioned an
Eternal bond
Forged in the fire
Inspired to invest

Time
Money
Energy

Building a home
A place for lovebirds
To roost
Permanently

And we
Build our nest
One small twig
At a time.

LoveBirds

* – “Bim” is one of the nicknames for my country, Barbados

About PassionPoet

Wordsmith. Spoken word artist. I inhale words and exhale poetry.....

Discussion

46 thoughts on “Lovebirds

  1. Wow love the melody I get from reading and the flow of the words. A person in love can write with so much passion and you have cross this BAR… Well done PassionPoet…great work

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    Posted by ainsleycarter | September 17, 2013, 1:00 PM
  2. Love is beautiful, as is this poem. Really like the idea of building the ‘nest’ one twig at a time. Enjoy!

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    Posted by Mary | September 17, 2013, 3:37 PM
  3. nice..not wanting to miss a beat and building one small twig at a time…that’s how it’s done..right? nice..

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    Posted by claudia | September 17, 2013, 3:37 PM
  4. that is all it takes…one small spark to set the world on fire…to get the ball rolling…and building a nest one twig at a time shows care….

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    Posted by brian miller | September 17, 2013, 4:04 PM
  5. Love the effect of the echoing chain rhymes – and the clever playing with your words too; together/to get her is a favourite … smiles.

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    Posted by Tony Maude | September 17, 2013, 4:27 PM
  6. the bliss of love, enjoy the fire. thank you

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    Posted by Tracy | September 17, 2013, 5:35 PM
  7. I love the love birds & sweet words ~ πŸ™‚

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    Posted by Grace | September 17, 2013, 7:51 PM
  8. I enjoyed this berthed within twin hearts and the picture is beautiful..

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    Posted by Truedessa | September 17, 2013, 8:43 PM
  9. Sweet πŸ™‚ I enjoyed this πŸ™‚

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    Posted by ayala | September 17, 2013, 8:55 PM
  10. lovely poem..loved the last lines ‘build our nest, one small twig at a time’..isn’t that how true love works..a continual building and sharing between the two.

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    Posted by Dorianna (paintswithwords) | September 18, 2013, 2:08 AM
  11. That’s just too sweet! Very nice.

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    Posted by Waltermarks | September 18, 2013, 6:12 PM
  12. twigs ..are we destined to gather them always..your words are a voice between the birds and life.and love a wonderful surprise ..thank you..for sharing

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    Posted by dreamersteve | September 18, 2013, 9:02 PM
  13. I’m all about the love . . . love the progression towards building a nest together.

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    Posted by Kathryn Dyche Dechairo | September 23, 2013, 4:14 PM
  14. Sounds like a happy place to be! I, too, love the nest building one twig at a time.

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    Posted by Sherry Blue Sky | September 23, 2013, 10:42 PM
  15. This poem made me long for Puerto Rico, for that scent of salt air and the warmth which allowed caged birds to fly freely into the rain forest…

    The building of a nest, yes, it takes time, energy, and the commitment of true love. Thank you for a sweet poem! And thanks so much for sharing at Real Toads’ Open Link Monday. Amy (a humble Toad)

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    Posted by Sharp Little Pencil | September 24, 2013, 12:03 AM
  16. added your friend as a friend, the style seems refreshingly different. This reinforces my desire that the next one I feel deep passion for, well… for that I am saving myself. But Lawd Jesus, Corey what a feast with ten saints and what glorious cake! The expression on that parrots face is priceless! well, thru passionate human eyes anyway.

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    Posted by L. Edgar Otto | September 24, 2013, 12:54 AM
  17. love this love poem…wonderful word play…….also the spontaneous flow…..

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    Posted by Sumana Roy | September 24, 2013, 8:06 AM
  18. Awww this warmed my heart, love is beautiful xxx

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    Posted by TENESIA TERI~ANN | October 12, 2013, 3:45 AM
  19. Reblogged this on Tenesia Teri~Ann and commented:
    beautiful poem

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    Posted by TENESIA TERI~ANN | October 12, 2013, 3:46 AM
  20. Beautiful!

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    Posted by msmeme803 | May 22, 2014, 4:38 PM

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