How many of you have been ever inspired by a piece of art? It is said that a picture is worth a thousand words. Well, this isn’t a thousand – when I finish typing I’ll post my word count ( 243, actually – haha!) – but the poem was inspired by the picture that I attached to it. It’s an erotic piece, as per usual, I guess, and the poem took hold of my pen and ran away with it… so, it wasn’t me – it wrote itself! Well, here we go… Enjoy!
Devour Me
Devour me…
Passionately
Don’t hold back
I give you my all
My body the
sacrificial lamb
upon the altar
of your intensity…
Your fiery passion
Envelops me
and devours my flesh.
The heat from your
tongue burns a path
from my neck to
the core of me
Hips open automatically
as lips seep seductively
Waiting
Patiently
for your lips
To overpower me…
Come, devour me…
Take me forcefully
I resist, wanting you
to fight me – break the
pretense of my rebellion
Eagerly
As we wrestle like lions,
each trying to pin the other down,
let me see if you are worthy
To wear the crown – the one
Who conquered me,
tamed the lioness intimately
and made her heel to your every whim
as your tongue skims
Seductively
over my sweet entrance.
Your body entrances me;
you put a spell all over me
when we touch, and
Suddenly
I can’t feel my legs.
You have overtaken me
with only one sensation
the penetration of your tongue
Inside of me.
And I melt
Stickily
around your ministrations.
The penetration of your eager
fingers, then tongue,
Lingers intensely
And I long for your hardened shaft
Inside me
So I whimper softly,
Begging with batting eyelids
and writhing hips
I feel you smile as you slip
Within these walls
And I start to make wild cat calls
As you continue to
Take me, and we
Cum…
Come, my lover….
Please –
Devour me…
Intimately seductive and passionate. Wow!
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Thanks! Just the reaction I was looking for 😀
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Your writing is exceptionally profound. I look forward to reading more. Have a great day!
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You honour me. Thank you so much. 🙂
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Oh,, this was hot. very very hot. my PC smokes while I read this
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*getting the fire brigade*
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Hot, hot, hot … now where’s my wife?
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Look, she’s over there! Get her quick! Thanks for passing through!
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You have captured the height of passion, the longing and the fulfillment, beautifully!
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Thank you so much, Mary ❤
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ha. i think you singed my fingers in typing this comment…just a bit….smiles…smoking…def full of passion….
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*bowing* Thank you, sir 🙂
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you have lived up to your title passionpoet
intense heat here
exploring the desire to be consumed
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Thanks Firefly 🙂 Glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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wow 🙂
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Thanks Ray!
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This piece is absolutely amaaaazing!!!!
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Thank u sooooo much Lotta Dreamin ❤ ❤
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Ooooooooooooooooooooooo!
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exactly what I was looking for! 😀
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This is DEEP!
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Thanks Sooo much Omeir!
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It’s fantastic when the words just flow and it all comes together. Your poetry has many elements of beauty and sensuality, very enjoyable. I will be following and look forward to reading more.
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Thanks sooooo much! Keep reading! I love comments like that.
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You are very welcome 🙂
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9ice one
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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Hopin fowrad to read more
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Keep commenting 🙂 I love feedback!
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WoW…left me breathless…forgot to come up for air for a minute! Your poetry is an erotic and sensual journey down seduction road which I will gladly travel any day.
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Please and thank you … I enjoy my work … and I’m glad you do too….
Just remember to breathe ….
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