This is another wordshine poem (For those who are new to this blog, click here and here to see where I explain this concept.) It’s one of the longer ones; it was so simple, but very effective in garnering the smile I was seeking 🙂 Please enjoy this little wordplay, and may these words shine into your heart as well!
I Spy
I spy with
my little eye
something that makes
head spin
heart race
lips part
breath start
to quicken
tongue gets to lickin’
‘cause throat’s dry ….
~*~
I spy with
my little eye
the goddess divine
that makes my heart sigh
my desire’s lit
spark caught
blaze flits
from synapse to synapse till
my whole brain is on fire!
~*~
I spy
with my little eye
the face
that launches
a thousand ships
the curves
deserving to be
gently traced
the breasts where I’d rest
weary head as we talk….
~*~
I spy my goddess
I spy my Queen
I spy my Empress
I spy….
YOU.
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Passion's Pleasure 
and I spy with my little eye a real sweet and romantic poem withn a joyful twist. Realy nicely done.
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Posted by nixworld2012 | April 3, 2012, 5:26 PMLOL thanks nix ❤
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Posted by bajanpoet | April 3, 2012, 5:26 PMsmiles…the short lines def pull you along in a quick pace…i remember playing i spy as well…still do with my kids at times….sweet close man
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Posted by brian miller | April 4, 2012, 2:53 AMThanks so much, Brian … was late to the party today – had a job interview that kept me away from my computer when 3:00 hit 🙂 Glad you enjoyed it!
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Posted by bajanpoet | April 4, 2012, 3:12 AMA sweetness to this poem that I certainly respond to…:))
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Posted by 1emeraldcity | April 4, 2012, 2:19 PMThanks so much Jackie *hugs*
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Posted by bajanpoet | April 6, 2012, 5:13 AMLovely! Such wonder, contemplating the one who has this effect. 🙂
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Posted by bittersweetverse | April 4, 2012, 5:19 PM*grinning* she makes me wonder too … 🙂
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Posted by bajanpoet | April 4, 2012, 6:27 PMThis is nostalgic and I love it!
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Posted by Laurie Kolp | April 4, 2012, 7:27 PMThanks Laurie ❤
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Posted by bajanpoet | April 4, 2012, 7:43 PMYou do indeed limn those beautiful qualities that draw us to the beloved that make hers yours. We can share in your passion and desire so that it reflects our own ways of coming to love our beloveds.
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Posted by Chazinator | April 5, 2012, 1:25 AMThanks Chaz! 🙂
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Posted by bajanpoet | April 6, 2012, 5:14 AMPlayful Bajan! “the curves deserving to be gently traced” like that especially.
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Posted by darkangelwrites | April 5, 2012, 6:56 PM*hugs* Thanks DA ❤ ❤ ❤
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Posted by bajanpoet | April 5, 2012, 7:35 PM