Last week was my first OpenLink night at dVerse Poetry Pub – and it was AWESOME. The poems were fast and furious – and there were 141 different poems and blogs to read through…. I didn’t get a chance to go through all of them … but there were about 40 different people that clicked through and commented on my poem Phoenix.
Now it’s here again. Tuesday. I’m trying to decide which piece to point to this time. But I am looking forward to hooking up with some awesome poets all over the world again.
So, if you’re here for the first time, stumbling through the doors of my humble blog abode, do peruse the poems I have here – but also click over to dVerse Poetry Pub and check out great poets from around the world!
And now…. Rain
Rain
nature’s wet showers
soak earth’s cover sheet
pleasure builds
floods released.
thunder
spasmic
rippling
convulsing
muscles contracting
winds intoxicated moan
pummelling passion
glass pane’s headboard banging
rain on galvanize pounding
nature’s climaxing.
Update: Also submitted for Poets United: Thursday Think Tank – Rain
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Great flow and word choice here – “nature’s wet showers soak earth’s cover sheet”, “glass pane’s headboard banging”. Wonderful imagery too. Thanks for sharing.
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And thanks for reading! I’m glad you liked it! 🙂
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Such power behind the rain, love the word play, nicely done!
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Thanks Pat 🙂 Glad you liked it!
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Glass panes headboard banging…ha, nice line..i love the rain…and find it very passionate so you nail that for me…glad you had fun last week and hope this one is all the more…smiles.
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Love the sensuous flow of innuendo.
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Thanks Colleen!
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Orgasmic.
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Totally.
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Wonderful imagery. I love the sensuousness of rain. 🙂
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So do I 🙂
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I loved your imagery; I went with climax of a different kind~ Well Done!
Congrats on your performance 😀
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Thanks so much Ella 🙂
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this got quite a double meaning. beautiful and sensual approach to the prompt. 🙂
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yes I am quite pleased at it 🙂 A very sensual piece 🙂
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I enjoyed the sensual rain of words… very nice write ~
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wonderful flow. loved it…
divisive
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Thank you so much!
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I love the build up of energy till the end.
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I really love this poem 🙂
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